this...
this is only the beginning
this...
this is only the beginning
Absolutely! There will be more orchestral pieces published here soon enough! :)
Not bad but TURN UP THE VOLUME HOLYYYYYYY that wavetable is just a line bro 😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Thank you! I'm sorry about the volume I've been using speakers lately I forgot about the volume. EDIT: I'd also like to add about it being flat. It was intentional, this was originally for my game and I wanted the music to not distract the player since the game demands focus, however, I don't know if that was the right decision though. I ultimately scrapped the game and just posted this loop anyways. Again thank you so much for the review, really appreciate!
i have no words
No words needed, I know what that’s like
It is finished.
My salad...
It is spun.
It’s beautiful 🥹
we need to collab
Bro I would be SO down for that … if I wasn’t using SunVox 😔
But I might try figuring out how collabs would work between SunVox and FL soon…
And, also might just get FL, not as soon!
Kill bill siren spotted
Intro is interesting. Sample is slowed down a bit too much and feela grainy, and also a bit out of place. 808 is a bit loud and clips a little bit, ruining immersion.
Following section is not bad. The 808 really drowns out the other instruments, you need to turn that down lol. I'm neither getting racing nor arctic vibes from this. Admittedly, the vocals are pretty catchy. Guitar in the background is chill.
All in all, not bad. Ideas are there, but your mixing and composition fell a little flat. Keep practicing those and you'll be good to go.
Composition: 5/10
Mixing and Mastering: 4/10
Relevance to Theme: 2/10
Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Intro is very icy and chill, pads and bell-tyoe thing in the bg are fire. Mix is very clean, if a bit quiet, and I feel like it could use some more low-end elements. I enjoy the vocals.
Breakdown at 1:06 is nice. I feel like the arctic theme is debatable after the intro, kinda just feels like generic DnB to me. But it's pretty damn good DnB! It also feels a bit repetitive for my taste, and I would've like to have heard some more variation throughout. All in all, well done!
Composition: 8.4/10
Mixing/Mastering: 9.5/10
Relevance to Theme: 8/10
Thank you for the comment! ArikXu was quite proud of the breakdown in this song XD
Doing something over and over again, and expecting a different result than what happens every time
the definition of insanity
What do you mean?
Oh, I got it
Intro is going hard. I feel like I'm in the arctic right now. Car sound was a nice touch. Synths feel a little dry and underprocessed.
0:18 section is neat, giving me some strong Mario Kart vibes. Drums could be a little more present in the mix, and the guitar feels mechanical. I enjoy the instrumentation. 0:45 once again, that guitar is quite robotic. 0:58 I'm getting Sharkbite OST vibes? (idk if you've ever played that game but it's pretty chill). Melodic content is a little repetitive. Mix is alright, could be a bit fuller. Maybe add some saturation or something to achieve that.
1:25 def feels like the final stretch of the race. Losing the arctic theme a little bit, but sonically it's great. Key change at 1:38 is refreshing. Ending is nice, feels like you just won the race and the crowd is cheering for you.
All in all, well done guys! Mixing and mastering could use some work, but you got some great sounds in there. Good luck!
Composition: 8/10
Mixing and Mastering: 7.2/10
Relevance to Theme: 8/10
Appreciate it we do!
WOOOO THIS IS GAS
Thank you Crispy!! ^^
music is pretty chill
wanna make a song/ask me something/criticize me/send me memes/whatever? dm me on discord @crispybatteryacid!
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