nice
nice
Thank you :]
This is some hard peak
Thanks man, I appreciate it!
this...
this is only the beginning
Absolutely! There will be more orchestral pieces published here soon enough! :)
Not bad but TURN UP THE VOLUME HOLYYYYYYY that wavetable is just a line bro ππππππππ
Thank you! I'm sorry about the volume I've been using speakers lately I forgot about the volume. EDIT: I'd also like to add about it being flat. It was intentional, this was originally for my game and I wanted the music to not distract the player since the game demands focus, however, I don't know if that was the right decision though. I ultimately scrapped the game and just posted this loop anyways. Again thank you so much for the review, really appreciate!
i have no words
No words needed, I know what thatβs like
It is finished.
My salad...
It is spun.
Itβs beautiful π₯Ή
we need to collab
Bro I would be SO down for that β¦ if I wasnβt using SunVox π
But I might try figuring out how collabs would work between SunVox and FL soonβ¦
And, also might just get FL, not as soon!
Kill bill siren spotted
Intro is interesting. Sample is slowed down a bit too much and feela grainy, and also a bit out of place. 808 is a bit loud and clips a little bit, ruining immersion.
Following section is not bad. The 808 really drowns out the other instruments, you need to turn that down lol. I'm neither getting racing nor arctic vibes from this. Admittedly, the vocals are pretty catchy. Guitar in the background is chill.
All in all, not bad. Ideas are there, but your mixing and composition fell a little flat. Keep practicing those and you'll be good to go.
Composition: 5/10
Mixing and Mastering: 4/10
Relevance to Theme: 2/10
Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Intro is very icy and chill, pads and bell-tyoe thing in the bg are fire. Mix is very clean, if a bit quiet, and I feel like it could use some more low-end elements. I enjoy the vocals.
Breakdown at 1:06 is nice. I feel like the arctic theme is debatable after the intro, kinda just feels like generic DnB to me. But it's pretty damn good DnB! It also feels a bit repetitive for my taste, and I would've like to have heard some more variation throughout. All in all, well done!
Composition: 8.4/10
Mixing/Mastering: 9.5/10
Relevance to Theme: 8/10
Thank you for the comment! ArikXu was quite proud of the breakdown in this song XD
music is pretty chill
wanna make a song/ask me something/criticize me/send me memes/whatever? dm me on discord @crispybatteryacid!
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