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[Digital in 1990]

somehow reminds me of Bee Swarm SImulator music, well done

DubZox responds:

Thanks!

[anticipation]

super chill, great job. lil repetitive, throw in a bridge or some different elements to keep things interesting.

when did you start making music?

VENELITHE responds:

thank you! I started making music three to four months ago.

[Song For Walking Down The Street While Eating A Banana You Stole From The bank]

Yo this is actually so chill nice work mate! One thing is that the kick is pretty loud, try turning it down a bit. The chords are jazzy, a little dissonant for my taste, but each to their own I guess. Well done!

VENELITHE responds:

thank you very much! i put alot of work into this ep, so I'm glad someone enjoyed it!

[Retrospective Nightmare (It's Over)]

WHAT IS THIS FIRE one thing is that the vocal layering sounds kinda off, like theres a grown man singing in the front and then a three year old singing in the back - idk if that was intentional or not but I thought I'd bring it up. Nice work.

TheChuckie responds:

ye playing around with harmonies kinda just really like the lofi feeling it gives cus i don't necessary think its bad its just different. its what I want I think so otherwise it will be tweaked before the album is finished

[Inspiration]

This is really nice! Gives me toby fox vibes, and that synth and the beginning and ending is fire. When did you start making music?

SnowyMiau responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! :3 I started taking music more seriously around 2 or 3 months ago, hehe

[[T70] Cybernetic Melody]

I agree with everythint @Creeperforce24 said in his review. Ideas are all there, though. Learn the big 3 that are theory, mixing and sound design, and you're good. Best of luck my man

Tr1ck70 responds:

Appreciate it brother :)
As said in my reply to Creeperforce24, the album/ep was rushed, but this was actually the main song i was proud of. Thank you for the feedback!

[Liminal Walls]

Dig the atmosphere in this one! Feels like it moves a bit slowly, but that's appropriate for an ambient track such as this. If I had to say something, you should probably boost the volume a bit, the whole master is pretty quiet.

frelvetor responds:

thank you so much for your feedback! I think you're right, I will make sure to improve on that on my next songs.

[Chasing Dusk]

microtones huh?

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microtones are scary

BeeFef responds:

They become less scary once you get used to listening to and working with them

[I EAT CHILDREN]

as do I, my good fellow

Okay so the ideas are there but everything feels mechanical and kind of mashed together. Go online, learn some basic music theory (chords, melodic structures, stuff like that). It'll work wonders.

foxtheterrific responds:

Thanks!

[Loud House Lore Song!]

Not bad, elements are there but everything feels real mechanical and lacks depth. I'd recommend learning some basic music thoery, it should do you well.

saberSAlt94 responds:

guh?