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Very nostalgic! Few things to point out is that at 0:45, the rain sample you had playing in the back stops and the whole track loses life for half a second. I think you shoulf keep it playing throughout the track to maintain that ambience.

Piano is nice, little mechanical and could use some dynamics. Don't mind it though. Ending section is climactic and chill, rain foley comes back which is good and the synth lead is refreshing. The outro feels rushed and ends very abruptly.

All in all, solid aria math ripoff. Just needs some polishing. Nice work!

RunoNG responds:

Thank you for feedback ❤

Yo that visualizer is fire nice work man!

ThePhreshPhrog responds:

Thank you! The visualizer is ALMAMPlayer, which is pretty simple to use and offers a decent amount of customizability as well. There's a bunch of VGM composers I like on Youtube who use it a lot. Definitely recommend checking it out if you ever are in need of some cool visuals.

This is a bop nice job

RobloxgangLeader456 responds:

THANK YOIU

aint no way you dont like posting on NG this place is the best man

The whole mix is super clean and this whole thing in its entirety is awesome. Well done, I will be sure to post this to the Audio Frontpage Suggestion forum. You and I should totally collab sometime btw

RobloxgangLeader456 responds:

yoooo thanks for enjoying the whole track!!

i am still not used to posting to new grounds but i dont really like how u cant put multiple audio files in one project, you really have to like upload each one individually. Another thing is probably me adjusting the covers for each song but thats just me cherry picking.

for the mix there couldve been a LOT of things that couldve been like a bit tweaked for the most part, like the bass or the harder kicks at the end of the track or really just making the joe swanson "nononono" a bit louder but thats just me cherry picking again

about the collab im totally down for one! just like, shoot me a message when you can. and again thnx for liking the sonnngggggg

TURN DOWN THE 808 I ALMOST HAD A HEART ATTACK

other than that not bad, the high frequencies beep thingies are a bit painful to my ears but thats about it

thefinalpie2 responds:

xD yea ik that was in the morning

holyyy turn down that 808 man otherwise not bad

thefinalpie2 responds:

yeah knew something was up, atleast i can hear the bass on my phone ;}

somehow reminds me of Bee Swarm SImulator music, well done

DubZox responds:

Thanks!

super chill, great job. lil repetitive, throw in a bridge or some different elements to keep things interesting.

when did you start making music?

VENELITHE responds:

thank you! I started making music three to four months ago.

Yo this is actually so chill nice work mate! One thing is that the kick is pretty loud, try turning it down a bit. The chords are jazzy, a little dissonant for my taste, but each to their own I guess. Well done!

VENELITHE responds:

thank you very much! i put alot of work into this ep, so I'm glad someone enjoyed it!

WHAT IS THIS FIRE one thing is that the vocal layering sounds kinda off, like theres a grown man singing in the front and then a three year old singing in the back - idk if that was intentional or not but I thought I'd bring it up. Nice work.

TheChuckie responds:

ye playing around with harmonies kinda just really like the lofi feeling it gives cus i don't necessary think its bad its just different. its what I want I think so otherwise it will be tweaked before the album is finished

music is pretty chill
wanna make a song/ask me something/criticize me/send me memes/whatever? dm me on discord @crispybatteryacid!

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