crispybatteryacid's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shirobon - Champions of Chiptune]

This is a track

["Whatcha need, son?"]

this is gas

[Macrocosmic Malfunction]

this atmosphere is diabolical

LD-W responds:

Wait until you hear the dark ambient album I'm releasing in a couple/few months ;)

[Windows Out]

But Mr. Black I don't want my windows to be out

I didn't even know know they could do that 😭

BusanBlack responds:

Some windows open out. I have windows that you pull on a reel and they open towards outside. Gotta let that fresh air in to keep the stink out.

[Bonfire of Spirits | 2024]

You should make a boss theme using this motif. Idk, an evil spirit rises from the bonfire and tries to rent our hero asunder....

[Punch-Out-Down]

this shit is nostalgic asf, nice work

[Sweet Honeydew]

Sweet mother of battery acid hot pockets, my boy Jacquavius Black be dropping every 12 hours🔥🔥🔥🗣🗣🗣

7/4 is refreshing. Drums could use some dynamics and a bit more variety but that's about it. nice work as always!

edit: oh wait it's Jamuary

*thats* why you're droppin so frequently

BusanBlack responds:

Yeah I hadn't come up with a song in 7/4 so I was like ok lets start at the basics. The drums definitely could use more variety but with life and all I only get like an hour or 2 on each song per day. I think Im going to come back to some of these songs and spiffy them up a bit.

[WALL OF FIRE]

Once again, no need for the T-rating. If the song does t have lyrics there's basically no way it could ever be offensive, so just rate your stuff E.

You guys have some long ass intros in some of your tracks. A little bit of silence is fine, but 10 seconds is a bit too much and I would suggest trimming it a bit.

Apart from that, this shit goes hard as fuck. Mix is really clean, lead is simple but is supported by some interesting background elements.

At 2:24 th3 mix starts to distort a bit because of that kick. I would suggest turning it down a tad, and also adding some kind of lead-in? Like holy i was not expecting that, a warning would have been nice lol.

Well done overall, I enjoyed this one.

[EDGE OF REASON]

I have a little bit to say about this one.

First of all there's no need for the T-rating, nothing about this is inappropriate.

Second, the track could definitely use some polishing; the melody is very repetitive and the mixing in that middle section is a bit harsh. I would suggest bringing in some other melodic elements, like a second lead or something, as well as putting some sidechain on that kick because gawd dayum that shit is muddy as fuck. I have to admit it goes hard but it does gets repetitive after a while.

Not bad. Keep up the good work gang

PROJECT-Variance responds:

Thanks a lot! I Was a little scared id get issues for the album cover, so i did that as a just in case.

[BLOOD LOSS]

I'm not too sure why you arent scouted yet...

*ahem* I'll take care of this! ☝️🤓